Um... Devastators? I only see Tacticals and Tacticals there
Now mind you I have never played a 1000 points game. It sounds different enough from usual E:A games, but it's also cheap and probably gives a good idea of the full game, perhaps somewhat like the excellent Training Scenarios in the book. One thing I suggest is maybe using a 4'x3' size table so it doesn't look that empty.
Supreme Commander, for marines of all people, is overkill at 1000 points (I wouldn't use it even at 2000 points).
Leaving a large chunk of your army guarding your blitz (which is simultaneously your shootiest unit and one with only 45 cm range at that) sounds somewhat suboptimal. IME playing Marines you can't afford leaving formations behind to guard your objectives. You want to drive your Rhinos around, get in your opponent's grill, stomp the BTS goal, capture their objectives and enforce your They Shall Not Pass with extreme prejudice.
To achieve those ends I suggest this armylist:
Devastators + 2 ML/TLLC Dreadnoughts @ 350
Tactical + 2 Rhinos + 3 Razorbacks @ 375 (BTS)
Tactical + 3 Rhinos + 1 Razorback @ 325
Pricewise this is passing over the character pack in favor of Razorbacks and Dreadnoughts which makes it about ₤8 (give or take) more expensive. In any case you will want both razorbacks and the characters in the future so this is only restructuring your guaranteed purchases anyway

. Also remember to never ever buy new Rhinos (or Land Raiders for that matter) without at least looking at ebay - I can't stress this enough.
Garrison your Devs on overwatch somewhere in the middle of the table with good lanes of firing (touching the dreadnoughts of course). They will be an anchor of your forward line while the tactical formations advance up the flanks. Don't spread out too much, keep your forces close and crush the enemy with the iron fist. For {Guilliman|Dorn|Sanguinius|Vulkan|Lion|Russ|Corax|Khan|Ferrus} and the Emperor!