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PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 2:48 pm 
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Good starter nonetheless.

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 Post subject: BFG drawings
PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 6:49 pm 
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I haven't writen any backround story, not a good writer. But, in a nutshell:

Our heroine wakes in the medical wing of the imperiums greatest base, Port Mav. The story will contain backflashes and dreams about the reason why she is in the medical ward. A commissar is standing next her bed and says that shes been reassined for duty.

Weeks go by and we find her in a corridor looking out from a window. Commissar (same as above) walks to her and says "Isin't she beatifull?" She glazes to commissar, knowing that he wasn't talking about her, but the ship outside the window. At this point there will be a first view of the ship that is in major role in the comic.

Commissar says "that's your new ship, Captain". Our heroine looks to commissar, now more suprised than before. "Captain? I'm promoted...?"

Characters:

Heroine: Captain Saga (something, something...).
A female version of Mal Reynolds (?), from firefly. Long red hair and green eyes. Works for the Imperial Navy, suffers from frequent night mares and flashbacks. She wears a standard naval uniform that icludes a great coat and ornaments. She has earned the Naval Cross for her actions in the past.

Ship: "Bladerunner", Dauntless Class Light Cruiser.
Saga's first ship as a Captain. "Bladerunner" has just been constructed when she gets it. The ship has a prow Lance cannon and weapon batterys on both side of the ship. It also has a defensive turret system and a void shield generator.

Commissar: (something) Kraven.
Assigned as a squadron advisor for the "Bladerunner".

Crew of the ship: Main command crew includes a coky XO (executive officer), psyker navigator, scribe, High Techpriest and Priest of Emperor. Also there are the gunnery officer, Vox (commucations and radar) officer and supprot staff, plus other ~100-200 navalcrew...

This the start that I've been planning. I could use ideas to improve it and how to continue from this. Ofcourse there will be some missions and stuff like that what will explain about the crew and the ship.

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 10:41 pm 
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looks like a good start to a very dynamic pic varrant officer :cool: lots of action

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