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[Chaos] Black Legion and Cultist finally released!
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 5:23 pm 
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Ah ... good point ! Orwellian "New Speak" or just good old fashioned Propaganda ! I tend to side with the forces that don't use deamons !  Call me Old School, but that being said, I have 5 H/H Traitor BNs + Chaos SM Legions for all 5 Powers !  Fair & Balanced, you know ! :D

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 5:28 pm 
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Indeed ... I'll have to look into that "Theory" ! :glare:

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 10:49 pm 
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You are all wrong!!!! The fact is that that description has been taken directly from CSM 40k codex, but the last part is missing, which stated "the bad thing is that they have chosen instead to be it?s greatest nemesis".

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 3:26 am 
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Okay, I've done my initial layout/edit/revamp of the Chaos lists, just have to find a place to host the file as it's near perfection  at 665kb... *laugh*

I'd like people to go over this with a fine-tooth comb and see if I've missed anything, typoed anything, or if anything isn't clear.

I'll post another thread, probably in the Lost and Damned section, once I've got it "up".

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 3:42 am 
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Okay, I've got the document posted and ready to be read, please head over and take a look and comment!

Embrace Chaos!

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 10:33 am 
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(Chroma @ Mar. 31 2007,17:55)
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From the description of the Chaos Space Marine Lord -

Chaos Lords and Sorcerer Lords are  warriors who have within them the will, skill and strength to be the greatest of Mankind's heroes.

Surely that can't be the proper text!

That's straight from the chaos Codex. It's just missing the next sentence:Their tragedy is that they have chosen to be Mankind's greatest nemesis.

EDIT: Dang! beaten to it.  :blush:

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I'm up to a very fixed up v1.1 of the "Black Crusade" supplement, please head over to the Lost and Damned sub-boards to take a peek!

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 1:10 pm 
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Chroma:  Beyond the CSM "mankind/nemesis" language, several of the fluff items need stylistic adjustments.  There are, for example, a couple of run-on sentences and such.  I simply passed on text which was graciously provided without any adjustment.

I'll try to get a list and some suggested edits, but I have plenty on my plate, so it's not likely to be soon.  You might want to take a pass at them if you have free time.

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 1:17 pm 
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(nealhunt @ Apr. 03 2007,13:10)
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Chroma: ?Beyond the CSM "mankind/nemesis" language, several of the fluff items need stylistic adjustments. ?There are, for example, a couple of run-on sentences and such. ?I simply passed on text which was graciously provided without any adjustment.

I'll try to get a list and some suggested edits, but I have plenty on my plate, so it's not likely to be soon. ?You might want to take a pass at them if you have free time.

Thanks Neal!

I haven't done a content/style pass yet for the most part, but it's definitely something on my plate, as well, I think I'd like to lengthen a few of the more sparse entries just to give them a little more weight.

I hope you like what I've done!

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