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- There's something funky going on with the fonts; They keep changing throughout the document.
Well, the sizes change a bit in different spots, but that's intentional. The text is different to 0.2, and I don't know why, but that's an unrelated issue.
I'll be reformatting the whole thing in the near future so it looks a little prettier. However, that's a fairly low-priority thing, since I've got a bunch of stuff I really should spend my time on first (like the more-and-more overdue editing projects that plague me).
If it's not just the sizes...I don't know what to tell you. They shouldn't.
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- I'm a little surprised by the Tac/Dev Autocannons? Wasn't the iconic Marine weapon the missile launcher, even back in the Heresy days?
I've always found the Autocannon to be the iconic old-school weapon - it's the big thing Chaos can have in 40K and ordinary Marines can't. Plus, it's the weapon of choice in the existing NetEA Chaos list.
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- Everything is called "Heresy" this and that to distinguish from Codex marines, which is well and good. But it was really only half the Legions that went heritical - how about using "Legion" as a qualifier instead? Eg. "Legion Tactical Units", "Legion Assault Units" etc?
Well, it's Heresy and not Heretic, but it's a fair point. I'll ponder it. I'm going to try reformatting for prettiness at some point, so I may do it then.
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- The 'commander' upgrade - shouldn't that say 'add a character to the formation'? There's no 'commander' unit in the list, after all.
I'll add some of the additional language from the standard SM list.
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- I can't find the Dreadclaw statline anywhere (except in the Chaos armylist, of course...)
Then verily, they shall be added at the next update!
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- I think the Whirlwind stats have been copy-pasted from the Rhino...
I knew there was something I forgot.
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- Let the tacticals keep their missile launchers
NEVER! THE AUTOCANNON IS THE WEAPON OF ALL RIGHT-THINKING SPACE MARINES!
Also, they count as the same thing anyway.
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- Give the devastators some of the old-style exotic heavy weapons (for example, Plasma cannon and Laser cannon); It would add a bit of flavor, I think.
I'd like the flavor, but if anything at this point I feel like I should be
removing units. This thing is massive! It scares me a little. Plus, the usual platitudes about Epic being all about generalities, not specifics.
I will love you to pieces if you do a batrep.
Thanks for taking the time to look this over, BTW. I appreciate it a lot.
I'll add the stuff in toward the end of the week and post a revised version.
