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WIP story, rate and review |
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the_fifth_horseman
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Post subject: WIP story, rate and review  Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2004 3:59 pm |
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Wrote this a while ago. Please tell me how do you like it.
"Suddenly, silence fell on the battlefield. Where the Librarian stood only a while ago, a robed, hooded figure knelt, both hands gripping a large sword wedged into the ground. Altough the Astartes were giants among men, the being stood a whole head and shoulders above even the tallest. Two white, feathery wings were protruding from its shoulders and a halo of golden light played around its head.
It made no noise.
Suddenly, it rose to its feet, turned to the surviving Dark Angels and pointed with one skeletal hand to the sky, where shapes of advancing Thunderhawks could be seen.
Then it turned to face the Traitors.
Nothing seemed to change, but where just a blink of an eye ago it held a sword now was a huge two-handed scythe, the blade gleaming with a dark reflection of the rays of the fading sun.
What happened afterwards cannot really be described as combat. The robed creature moved with fluidity and grace that of a skilled dancer and with each step a dead traitor fell. It was like some macabre dance, its metrum dictated not by music but by screams of dying and sound of heads falling to the blood-soaked ground."
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