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 AMTL v3.11 review
 
 Page 1:
 1.) Emperor Titan not 0-1?
 2.) Orbital Support: It should say ?One AM Cruiser OR One AM Battleship?.
 3.) Upgrade list: It's ?Ordinati?.
 4.) Upgrade list: Is the Sacred Icon or are the Carapace Multilasers ?Battle Titans only?? On page 2 it?s the other way round as on page 1.
 5.) Upgrade list: The fire arc of the Multilasers is missing (or is it all round?).
 6.) Upgrade list: All lists on that page say ?points?, just this says ?pts?. On page 2 they all say ?pts?. Make a decision.
 7.) Costing Note: The first sentence should say ?pts?, not ?pt?.
 
 Page 2:
 1.) Second line: ?Ordinati? again.
 2.) Carapace Landing Pad: Shouldn?t it be ?(Carapace only)??
 3.) Corvus Assault Pod: Shouldn?t it be ?(Arm only)??
 4.) Laser Burner: The ?OR? should be in the range column.
 5.) Warheads: How does WYSIWYG work with these? Can I just convert a missile and use it with a different warhead in every game, or does it have to be a particular one, that looks simlar to those that were available back in time (or in case of Deathstrike, like the missile of the DML)?
 6.) Upgrade list: It should say ?Battle Titans and Ordinati Upgrades? just like on page 1 to avoid confusion.
 7.) Upgrade list: Mistakes like on page 1.
 
 Page 3:
 1.) Ordinatus Minoris Company: It should say ?Ordinati? as there is more than one. Also it should say ?select [?] from War Gryphons army list? like in the line below.
 2.) Ordinatus Majoris: It should say ?or from the Ordinatus Weapon list? to avoid confusion.
 3.) Cataphract Tank Company: It should say ?Cataphractes?, that is the name of that particular divison.
 4.) Super-Heavy Tank Company: It should say ?Cataphractes Super-Heavy Tank Company?.
 5.) Artillery: It should say ?Ballisterai?, that is the name of the artillery division.
 6.) Deathstrike Missile Battery: Should be removed as every Ordinatus type can choose Deathstrike Missiles and those are more AM-like while DML is more Guard-like.
 7.) Tech-Lord: Should be 0-1, I hope it?s a typo.
 8.) Titan Legion Battlegroups: Should have the restriction ?no Legate? or better ?no Legates?, or again you could have more than one Supreme Commander.
 
 Unit profile pages:
 These units from the rules book are missing and not mentioned :
 Leman Russ, LR Demolisher, LR Vanquisher, Hellhound, Hydra, Chimera, Basilisk, Bombard, Manticore, Deathstrike ML (should be removed anyway, see page 3 comment 6), Sentinel, Baneblade, Shadowsword, Thunderbolt, Marauder.
 These units from other sources should have their profiles added to the pdf-file (or you would have to search for them to be able to use the list):
 Rapier Laser Destroyer, Stormblade, Stormsword.
 
 Page 6:
 1.) Ordinati: Both types have the fire arcs missing for their secondary armament.
 
 Page 7:
 1.) Reaver Titan: The notes don?t say clear enough that he can only have 2 Arm and 1 Carapace weapon.
 
 Page 8:
 1.) Warlord Titan: The notes don?t say clear enough that he can only have 2 Arm and 2 Carapace weapons.
 
 Page 9:
 1.) Warmonger: It should say ?8 Doomstrike Missiles?. Vengeance Cannon should be Titan Kller (3) or (D6), or it would not stand out as the ultimate anti-war-engine-weapon that it is (Defence Laser already has TK (D3).
 2.) Imperator: It should say ?Defence Laser?, not ?Defense Laser?
 
 Page 11:
 1.) Fire Control Centre is missing in the list. Should be like the one from the Warmonger.
 2.) List should have a ?count as? column like in v2, so that you can see which weapon it would be in a Tournament Game (unless player tells the opponent it counts as something else of course).
 
 Pages 12-14:
 Same mistakes like pages 1-3.
 
 Page 15:
 Probably also some mistakes spilled over from the profiles here.
 
 
 
 
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